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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 16, 2005 1:45:06 GMT -5
Ok, ok.....so I went totally sappy on Chapter 25!!!! So sue me(actually please don't, not that you'd get anything worth while)!! I couldn't help myself....I was in major sap mode & it just kinda all spilled out!!!!!!!!!! But ya know what? I like my new chapter regaurdless of all the sappy-flooding =)
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Post by lightdion on Jul 17, 2005 3:22:38 GMT -5
Okay, folks you've gotta keep on reading through Chapters 24 and 25, cause this has gotta be one of the major turning points of this story. Chapter 24 is a major leadway for Chapter 25, the carnival turned out to be a great night for Davey- Dave and Honey, but what happens that night is what may change what they have forever! Not giving much away but, there are alot of shocking secrets that will be exposed feelings reveal and true colrs truly shining through!! There is also a new light to being both "Bitchy and Racist" at the same time.
Must read. Good spilling out DRL cause this is a thousand times better than "Trapped in the closet"!
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 17, 2005 13:12:10 GMT -5
Better then RKelly?! truely flattered =D So ya, read it people!! lol
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Post by lightdion on Jul 19, 2005 3:41:01 GMT -5
David's Story Con't:
Chapters 26- 28 are unbelieveable. I know y'all may think that I'm trynna be nice when Iam giving out these reviews but trust- Iam being 100% honest!! Read for yourself and see..........
Anywhoo, those chapters are hilarious, charming, heart wrenching, and will have ya all into it and around up in it! Let's just say Honey gets the worst mightmare of her life from David Van Wyke, but a breakthough eventually comes through for her. Two years pass by and Hoeney becomes a more independent, more evolved lady. Fate brings her back to our David and the two become closer than ever. Read to see what I mean. Not only is David in it, but of course you see the classic five at thier hilarious best........
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 25, 2005 0:57:21 GMT -5
Hey, I'll be posting a new chapter probably tomorrow night. Just read "Dennis The Un-menace"....soo good!!!!!!!!!! Follows the movie so far from Davids retirement on. It infuriates me to no end cause course the whole "David firing" is in it & I wanted to pound Otis(much love to the man though)!!!! Great story, a lot of Eddie & Paul which is always a good thing =D Go read it people & I'll be updating my own story soon.
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Post by lightdion on Jul 26, 2005 3:55:30 GMT -5
Y'all chapters 28-30 are really good. David moves in with Honey and they really play house. They learn more about each other, sets some rules and David becomes more independent now that he does not live at home anymore. Chapter 30 follows the movie as a reluctnat Honey lets David go on the tour for two months. David behaves, but unfortunately learns that people are still racists. When he returns, he see one of his groupmates being unfaithful and it bothers him...
So go read, and y'all know what I'm talking about.
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 27, 2005 0:06:43 GMT -5
*Cough* Otis *Cough* Sorry. Had to put it. But much love & respect to the man =D
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Post by lightdion on Jul 28, 2005 3:16:37 GMT -5
Hey y'all chapters 30 and 31 are totally different from each other. Chapter 30 is all about heartwarming love and good soul food as the whole group and thier peeps come over for a hilarious welcome home dinner together that will have you laughing straight up. Chapter 31 is more serious although it does have it funny moments. David Van Prick is back and cause big trouble for David. Racism, love, and sex are the main issues in this chapter and it will guarantee teach a lesson here!! Go read and find out.
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 28, 2005 3:21:22 GMT -5
Your reviews.....no words, am truely flattered & as it does with David in my story, flattery gets ya far with me as well, as far as my writting that is! So listen to the girl, go read people!! =D
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Post by lightdion on Jul 28, 2005 3:25:17 GMT -5
No Problem. Just doing what's right!
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 29, 2005 23:06:38 GMT -5
Hey, you got at put up a review for chapter 32!! =)
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 29, 2005 23:20:33 GMT -5
And chapter 33!! =)
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Post by lightdion on Jul 30, 2005 2:20:07 GMT -5
Everyone, if you are missing out this stroy then, you are missing out on a Temptalious treat. Chapter 33 is all quite familiar, except even better with more details about what happened while the Tempts. loved ones watched them perform "My Girl" on The Ed Sullivan Show and what happened afterwards. And course David's gotta girl- Honey which of course is much more interesting and obvious since Honey is one of the main characters in the story....... anywhoo, it goes on the the Flossin' what they've earned scene when they all get their cars and David gets it's limo. It goes further though, cause David gets his new driver Flynn and shows of his car to Honey. Anywayz don't wanna give out too much info on that chapter soooooo.......
Chapter 34 is very sentimental yet of course has it's humor in it. It's Christmas 1965, and things for David and Honey's relationship goes up to an extremly higher level. Not giving too info on it, but let;s just say, that it is one Christmas that they both will never forget. Of course there is almost everyone else in the chapter soooooo the chapters are great. Get Ur butts in there and read to find out!!
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Post by davidruffinlover on Jul 30, 2005 2:33:22 GMT -5
I love ur reviews =) Where's the rest of ur new story?! lol.
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Post by davidruffinlover on Aug 1, 2005 22:50:55 GMT -5
Hey ya'll. Just read the second part of Lightdions "Dennis the Un-menace" & let me tell you....soooo good!! Since Davids gone, course The Tempts need a "replacement"(& I use that word loosely). Ya'll have any idea whom that person could be....hmm, lets think. I hope you all know who I mean =D The story has all the guys in it, & you just gotta love it. David wants back in the group, wants to change Otis's mind which we all know is difficult!! What will David do?!..........
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